Making a Plan Before I Write

I am learning to make a plan before I write my story. I had to remember to put pictures in my head and write it down. My story matches my plan. It was easy to use the plan for my story.

Julie

on Friday I went to the spa pool

On Friday I went driving one hour to a spa pool.

On Friday I went driving one hour to a spa pool. The spa pool was deep I could not reach the ground because it is too deep. I got a board. It is to float on  and to kick around the pool. The board looked like a person. I can swim all the way to the end. I felt happy because I can swim all the way to the end.